One of my favourite category romance books of ALL TIME (yes, it's THAT good) is Liz Fielding's The Secret Life of Lady Gabriella (In fact, I'm going to reread it really soon). Since reading that book, I do my utmost to keep up to date with what Liz puts out and I'm never disappointed. So, I was VERY excited to hear that Liz had put out a romance writing craft book and even MORE excited when she agreed to share some with my Theory on Thursday readers. So, without further ado (and no more fan girl moments) here it is...
Begin your story at a moment of crisis, a point in
time when your character’s life is about to change for ever.
— Mollie Blake’s Writing
Workshop Notes from Secret Wedding by Liz Fielding
Mollie Blake is a woman who knows what’s
she’s talking about. Well, obviously, I created her back in 2000 for my
novella,The Secret Wedding and she’s come with me on the
adventure of writing my Little Book of Writing Romance.
This little book is a
primer, an entry level aid for the writer who has a story to tell, but is
struggling to get it out of her head and onto paper. To quote the theme song
for the movie of Erich Segal’s bestselling book Love Story, “How
do you begin…?”
I know how that feels, I’ve
been there and this book is the distillation of the things I’ve learned over
twenty years as a published author.
It’s the book I wish I’d
had when I was starting out.
My purpose has been to
explain, in the simplest terms, and using examples from my own work, how to
make the transition from the story in your head to words on paper. How to write
a compelling opening — I have deconstructed an opening scene — deepen conflict,
write honest emotion, hopefully with a touch of humour to leaven the mix. How
to write crisp dialogue, develop the romance, add a little sizzle.
The primary purpose of a
romance novel is to elicit a positive emotional experience for the reader. Make
her smile, make her cry, make her sigh with pleasure. To put it in a nut shell,
to give her a good time.
To achieve that, you must
give her characters she will care about, with whom she will be happy to share
hours of her precious time, characters who, no matter what their faults may be
— and perfection is so dull — are likeable.
To write their story you
will have to know your characters intimately. For this, you need to do more
than fill out a character worksheet with all their physical characteristics,
their birth sign, their place in the family hierarchy, the names of their
siblings.
Of course you have to know
what colour eyes and hair your hero has, how tall he is, how old he is — ditto
your heroine — before you begin. Making a note of these details and pinning it
up so that you can check them when you’re in full flow a hundred pages into
your manuscript is a sensible precaution. (You may think you couldn’t possibly
forget these vital statistics but you will.)
These are, however, no more
than the basics.
To come alive on the page,
your hero and heroine must be more than two-dimensional cardboard cut-outs that
you move around the stage. You should not be asking yourself “what can I make
them do next”. If your characters are blood-and-bones, heart-and-soul real, you
will know what they would do, just as you instinctively know what someone close
to you would do in any given circumstance.
You may hear authors
talking about characters who “take over” the story. That is not because the
author is not in control of her characters, but because she has created
three-dimensional, living, breathing people, men and women she knows so well
that her writing brain is flying ahead of her fingers on the keyboard.
To truly know your
characters you must understand not just what they look like, where they went to
school, what they do for a living but see them living in their own world,
having a life before you write Chapter One.
Download my book and I’ll
show you how I do that :)
Liz Fielding is the author of more than sixty
romances and has been nominated seven times for the Romance Writers’ of America
RITA® award, winning twice with The Best Man & the Bridesmaid and The
Marriage Miracle. She has also been nominated three times for the UK’s
Romantic Novelists’ Association “Romance Prize”, winning with A Family of His
Own.
She has also received a Lifetime Achievement Award
from Romantic Times BOOKclub magazine
A full list of her books is available at: Liz Fielding's Website
Liz Fielding’s Little Book of Writing
Romance is available as an eBook download from Amazon.
I've got this book on my Kindle and I cannot WAIT to get stuck in :) Has anyone else read it yet? I'd love to hear your thoughts?!
8 comments:
Liz, your book sounds just like the kind of book I could have done with with I first started out, too :-)
As a 'pantser' writer i don't always have every detail to hand at the start you suggest here, but my characters soon let me know just what I need from them before I am very far into the story.
Thanks for sharing.
The Secret Life of Lady Gabriella is one of my favourites too! It's sitting on my bookshelf, cover cracked and pages worn. Made me laugh, made me sigh. Liz, your book sounds fantastic. As an aspiring author, it's probably just what I need!
Thanks,
Madeline
The Little Book is brilliant - I am working my way through it and thoroughly enjoying it. Very useful and interesting.
Now I'm getting all interested in The Secret Life of Lady Gabriella. I'm curious to read this one now!
OMG Rachel, don't mean to give offence but what horrible captchas! I had to try 3 times to get my first comment to take. Not one but two words, imagine! Upside down and in light and shade and every which way! Don't know why I'm coming back again for more!
Hi Sherry - sounds like you have great characters. Mine are not being chatty at the moment and it's driving me batty!
Hey Madeline - I haven't met anyone that's read Gabriella and didn't fall in love with it. Let me know how you go with Liz's Little Book!
Oh dear Maria- I'm so sorry that you had those issues. But I think it just might be blogger tonight. I just commented on a Blogger site and had the same horrid, long words! Thanks for stopping by :)
Great advice on character development. Those character worksheets barely scratch the surface!
And yes, I hate blogger's captchas. Impossible to read, so hopefully they'll change soon.
Rachael - I'm feeling so bad about that comment I left earlier that I had to come back and say sorry. I just had a similar comment to the one I left on your blog from a very nice reader of mine who was experiencing blogger issues too. I am so sorry!
Your blog is lovely.
Oh Maria - don't stress! I'm just SO glad you found my blog :)
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