Saturday, October 8, 2011

My first Six Sentence Sunday


I may have put it out there on Twitter last Sunday that THIS week, I'd join the Six Sentence Sunday Fun.

Have NO idea if I'm doing this right but I'm going to share with you six sentences from my current WIP, Hollywood Heartbreak and hope you enjoy them.

It's an extract from just after the first sex scene, which Holly my heroine at first thinks was a mistake and that the hero, Nate must be regretting. Then, he sets out to prove that it wasn't a mistake at all...

Where her boldness came from she had no idea? Perhaps it was the thought that this really was an aberration in her life, a holiday fling, and so what did she have to lose? But suddenly she heard herself asking, “Are there any other parts of me you find beautiful?”

“Oh yes.” He tickled her knees, drew mesmerizing circles at the back of them with his thumbs. “These should be put on display in national gallery.”

So... that's a tiny snippet of what I hope to finish over the next two weeks (actually I hope to finish in the next week but I'm being generous to myself)!

If you'd like to read other Six Sentence Sunday participants of sign up for SSS yourself, head on over to Six Sentence Sunday!

Let me know if you've done SSS this week, so I can check yours out!

Also, I have a COVER for ONE PERFECT NIGHT!!! It's absolutely beautiful and hot and I cannot WAIT to share it with you. Am just waiting on confirmation that I'm allowed to and then I'll post it!!


16 comments:

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

welcome to the six! Very nice.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Good job. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.

Rachael Johns said...

Thanks Carrie and Taryn. Off to check out your contributions!

Serena Bell said...

Welcome, Rachael! Nice six! I giggled at the National Gallery comment.

Angela Guillaume said...

Welcome to SSS!!!! This is a great bunch. I just joined 3 weeks ago, so am still a newbie, but it's such fun and love reading the other excerpts.

Sherry Gloag said...

Welcome to SSS. You certainly started out of the blocks fast. :-)

Paula Martin said...

Welcome to 6 Sentence Sunday - love your six!

Dee Carney said...

Oh, I loved his reply! Nice six and welcome!

sue said...

Welcome! nice six. The group here is wonderful

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Ah, she's more daring than she thought. Sounds like she's changing whether she's ready or not. Welcome to Six Sunday!

Chrystalla Thoma said...

Welcome to sss! I loved your six, very nice details.

Rachael Johns said...

Thanks everyone - I'm trying to check out your six sentences to.

Dee - can't find one for you. Am I looking in the wrong place?

Jackie Ashenden said...

Lovely Rach!

1000th.monkey said...

Welcome!

...you can cut that first question mark 'cause it's not needed ;)

Rachael Johns said...

Thanks 1000th Monkey - I have a strange extra question mark habit in my first drafts :)

Elaine AM Smith said...

I enjoyed your Six.
Any man who avoid the more obvious attractions and shows and appreciation for knees has got to be a keeper ;)